Two Scenes – Jane Bowles



Jane Bowles - Born- Jane Sydney Auer (February 22 , 1917 – May 4, 1973)


The Iron Table


Here is an example of where I find the research on the author to lend more to the story after I discover some hidden details. As you can see above, Jane died before these two pieces were published in the BASS. She had problems with alcohol, and according to web sources, her health declined steadily after a stroke at a young age. Research also revealed that Jane spent some time in Morocco with he husband and also had an affair with a women while there. It is with these two discoveries that the first “Scene” makes more sense. Initially, I really didn’t care for the story. I thought it interesting...but nothing special. The small details that are nestled within the scene are given so much more weight that I now know two very important details about Jane’s life.


Wonderful passage at the end of the first scene.


“ A serious grief would silence their argument. They would share it and not be able to look into each other’s eyes. But as long as she could she would hold off the moment.”


Lila and Frank


The second “Scene” really unfolds after the action, and we see development explode when insight into a relationship between a brother and sister is revealed. Jane does a masterful job at cracking open the twisted complex entanglement the two share in a few brief sentences.


“So Lila moved about in the vivid world of her brother’s lies, with full awareness always that just beyond them lay the amorphous and hidden world of reality. These lies which thrilled her heart seemed to cull their exciting quality from her never-failing consciousness of the true events they concealed.”


It’s too bad that Bowles only published 7 short stories. It seems that she found a secret to really conveying tension in a small space...exactly what a good short story requires.


8 out of 10

Intermission

Before I finish out the BASS from 1978, I decided to provide you with two of the small reviews that I wrote for the newspaper. Both articles are courtesy of the Virginian-Pilot.

The Virginian-Pilot(Norfolk, VA.)

November 4, 2007 Sunday
The Virginian-Pilot Edition

Quality writing praised

BYLINE: JAKON HAYS

SECTION: DAILY BREAK; Pg. E8

LENGTH: 679 words

By Jakon Hays

The Virginian-Pilot

A YEARLONG MISSION to liberate quality writing from the confines of the bottom of magazine stands. That is what Stephen King aimed for, and it's what he delivers in this year's collection of "Best American Short Stories."

Series editor Heidi Pitlor took charge of boiling down the bulk of 4,000 stories, but King went beyond his predecessor guest editors, reading hundreds of the stories himself.

In his introduction, King offers an insightful view into the current realities of short story writing, short stories in our culture, and what ultimately drives or forces the authors and editors into the selections they write and choose to include in their magazines. King detects a pulse in the American short story, but it is slowing and the prognosis is not good - partly because authors write what sells rather than writing for the love of writing, creativity and ultimately for their readers. King's compilation is a step-by-step regimen to be dissected and studied in order to learn what must be done to save and revive the short story format.

Working your way into the book, you may find yourself reading what you think is a somewhat plain, flat tale only to have your thoughts overturned in the realization that what you prejudged is a masterful story built on a deliberately flawed foundation meant to collapse in the last few pages. John Barth's "Toga Party" is a prime example of a skilled storyteller revealing his power at the last moment, planting a seed that lets the story remain with you for days.

A view inside a love affair between an Olympic gold swimmer, well into his 40s, and a 16-year-old school girl during the early 1900s is told by Lauren Groff in "L. DeBard and Aliette." Sexuality, power and manipulation, both emotional and physical, are wound into this illicit affair. The story, spanning years, illustrates the cause and effect of triumph over a crippling disease, the insensitivity of conceit and a vision of cruelty people can deliberately inflict on those they love and admire.

The theme of manipulation continues in "Allegiance" by Aryn Kyle. Marital infidelity and parental dysfunction tear and slowly degrade a family as its youngest member struggles to find her way among the dangers of the schoolyard social structure. The cruelty of classmates and the jockeying of her parents for power within their failing marriage can be uncomfortable to read.

Rounding out my favorites in this New York Times best-seller is the story of a retired intelligence operative whose duty it was to spread infectious diseases in countries deemed a threat to America. In "The Boy in Zaquitos," Bruce McAllister simply and skillfully develops a character that allows the reader to see the human side emerge from a being in an occupation that many of us assume to be without soul.

Jakon Hays is a news researcher for The Virginian-Pilot. jakon.hays@pilotonline.com

"The Best American Short Stories 2007"

Stephen King, editor

Houghton Mifflin. 448 pp. $14 (paper)

The series

The annual "Best American" series includes the following, all available now. Most are $28 in hardback, $14 paper. Details:www.houghtonmifflinbooks.com/features/best_american/

Best American Short Stories: Stephen King, editor

... Comics: Chris Ware, editor

... Essays: David Foster Wallace

... Mystery Stories: Carl Hiaasen

... Nonrequired Reading: Dave Eggers

... Science and Nature Writing: Richard Preston

... Spiritual Writing: Philip Zaleski

... Sports Writing: David Maraniss

... Travel Writing: Susan Orlean

on the bandwagon ...

* "The Best American Science Writing": Gina Kolata, editor (Ecco/HarperPerennial, $14.95)

* "The Best Buddhist Writing 2007": edited by Melvin McLeod and editors of the Shambhala Sun (Shambhala, $16.95)

* "Best New American Voices 2008: Fresh Fiction from the Top Writing Programs." Richard Bausch, ed. (Harcourt, $15). The programs, in the U.S. and Canada, include those at George Mason University, Hollins University, the University of Virginia, and Virginia Commonwealth (though none of this year's contributors is from any of those schools).




The Virginian-Pilot(Norfolk, VA.)

November 23, 2008 Sunday
The Virginian-Pilot Edition

SECTION: DAILY BREAK; Pg. E3

LENGTH: 560 words

Footnotes

Guest editor Salman Rushdie admirably delivers a cross-section of short fiction in the 2008 "Best American Short Stories" (Houghton Mifflin, $14). Among the 20 from The New Yorker, Harper's, The Atlantic Monthly and the like, established authors such as Alice Munro, Tobias Wolff and Kevin Brockmeier find their works next to offerings by newer standouts such as Katie Chase and Miroslav Penkov. Her "Man and Wife" and his "Buying Lenin" comfortably disturb the reader with writing that lingers. (Jakon Hays, The Pilot)



Bromeliads - Joy Williams





Joy Williams - February 11, 1944


Henry Rollins has a piece in one of his spoken word performances where he discusses the themes of movies. It is a digression from his discussion of poetry...at least I think I am remembering all of this correctly. Anyway, he talks about how a majority movies need to be depressing...how it makes them more appealing to people. He gives an example of two movies...one of which is super happy, and everything goes right for the main character. The second takes place in a world of hell, it is dark and the world is ending for the main character. He jokes that the ticket line for the latter movie would be around the block while almost no one would g and see the “happy” movie.


What is our attraction to theses dark disturbing movies?


Joy Williams seems to have figured out that writing “downer” pieces works for her voice and she has developed fans. She has been nominated for a Pulitzer in Fiction, as well as a National Book Award.


So, Bromeliads is very much a downer.


In bios about the author, she is described as creating fiction where her “Characters are usually divorced, children are abandoned, and their lives are consumed with fear, often irrational...”


About hits the nail on the head for this little piece.


I find it interesting to read about the mental breakdown of people. Again the mind fascinates me...it’s sad to see a persons own chemical makeup turn against them and cause their mind to lose its bearings and cause such pain to family members.


It happens all too often though.


And finally this quote from an online interview with Joy Williams-

“The conundrum of literature is that it is not supposed to say anything. Often a reader can enjoy a story or novel simply because he can admire the writer’s skill in getting out of it.”


7 out of 10

Telling the Bees - L. Hluchan Sintetos


Telling the Bees - L. Hluchan Sintetos


Before doing my research on this author, the actual reading of this story was very enjoyable. I enjoyed the title and learning what it meant. I love superstitions. It was an upfront, strong, and bold story. Honest, sexual and colorful.


Golden honey, gleaming white teeth, white shirt, heat and sweat.


Now to the author. Who is L. Hluchan Sintetos?


Was this story written by a woman? I only assumed it was by the biographical notes in the back. Upon going through my normal steps in researching the author, I found very little about Sintetos. I did though find this interesting letter to the editor from the New York Times.


GLOSSY FICTION

January 29, 1984

To the Editor:

Frederick Busch, in his article on fiction, mentions ''Hollywood Starlet Tells All'' by a probably anagrammatic L. Hluchan Sintetos.

Indeed, sintetos approximates sintetico (synthetic), and L. Hluchan Sintetos works out nicely as Stella Hutchinson. Hiding her starlet under a bushel?

A Freudian touch. An a was available for the feminine form (pun serendipitous and paradoxical) sintetas (without teats). In a mystery story, this would have made a good clue -cherchez la sex change.

Vive la difference. EDWARD WELLEN New Rochelle, N.Y.


AWESOME!!! Man, that’s too cool. A great little story written by a mystery author. And as far as I can tell the author has yet to be discovered.


I love mysteries like this and am so happy that this little story found its way into the collection.



9 out of 10

The Windmill Man – Tim McCarthy


Tim McCarthy - ??- ??


This is a classic example of an author that seems to just have dropped out. I was unable to locate anything about him outside of the notes about the authors in the back of the BASS. The notes mention that McCarthy grew up in Vermont and also attended Goddard College (among others). It also mentions that he lives/ed in a Christian Community out in the West. Perhaps this explains his disappearance.


I enjoyed “The Windmill Man”. Classic struggle against forces story.


There has always been something that has intrigued me about windmills. I think some of it has to do with my father always pointing them out along the road during our road trips. I have found myself doing the same on my adult trips with family and friends. The machines are amazing. So simple yet able to do so much. Pulling water from the ground, generating electricity...


The men who assembled and maintained these great machines in the past as well as the people who tackle the monsters out there today are real ballsy. I think it would be fun to be a Windmill Man.


7 out of 10

Rough Strife – Lynne Sharon Schwartz



Lynne Sharon Schwartz, 1939 -


I think that most of the stories that appeal to me are stories that present a glimpse into someone’s life. Just a slice of an everyday affair, a few years of an interesting character, a relationship examined closely.


I enjoyed “Rough Strife” because it was simply a slice of what could be a real life story. Granted the characters in the story have it rough...but overall, an entertaining relationship story.


Time peg in the story was right on with a pregnant character drinking and taking NoDoz but afraid of “drugs”. I suppose that explains what happened to my generation!


7 out of 10

Redemption – John Gardner



John Gardner July 21, 1933 - September 14, 1982


As mentioned in the previous post, I had to make it far into the volume before I found my favorite.


Now I can say that I had to make it just as far to find my least favorite.


Part of doing these reviews gives me a chance to do research on the authors. It’s nice to find wiki pages for some of the authors. I do check behind the pages to make sure that everything I see there is accurate. I’m glad to see that there are people out there that still respect their work and take time to create the pages for the authors. Sometimes I have to do a bit more digging but I rather enjoy it. I’ve really enjoyed discovering what has become of these authors. A far number of them were pretty established within the American literary community when their story was selection for inclusion in these collections. A good number also went along to write some pretty impressive works.


John Gardner wrote Grendel. I never had the chance to read it but it was on my list of “must reads”. I remember sitting at a bar in Waterside with a copy of “If You Meet the Buddha on the Road, Kill Him!” and some guy, a think it must have been a sailor, told me to read “Grendel” and “Still Life with Woodpecker”. I suppose they fall into a genre. Never read “Woodpecker” but I think I will be adopting the wearing of red socks like Robbins who got it from Leary.


Notice that I am not writing much about the actual story?


If you don’t have anything nice to say then...


Here is what I will say about the story -


Redemption is a fictionalized account of the accident that Gardner was involved in when he was a young boy. Gardner was driving a tractor when he accidentally ran over and killed his brother. As anyone would expect, Gardner carried the guilt around for a lifetime and it should be noted that it shaped his style of fiction...how could it not.


I can’t imagine how Gardner sat down at his desk and wrote out that scene. I have trouble just standing in the shower and thinking about the death of a loved one. I choke up, tears well...


His bio states that he was a favorite at The Breadloaf Writers Conference. Well, it’s in Vermont so it’s gotta be good! He also wrote a novel won the National Book Critics' Circle Award in 1976 which was set in Vermont. Niiiice. And in a final, strange sort of weird coincidence with my life...Gardner died in a motorcycle accident in Susquehanna Pennsylvania.


3 out of 10

The Way People Run – Christopher Tilghman

  When I was reading and writing here more frequently, I remember the feeling when the story delivered a surprise. I’m not talking about...